The Perfect Teenage Tragedy

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    The Perfect Teenage Tragedy

    Inside She's crying out for help
    Physically She's given up
    She holds on barely breathing
    Her lungs slowly giving out
    Whats the point of holding on?
    When She knows She's dying
    She brings herself closer to the cliff's edge
    She lets go and then She falls
    The Perfect Teenage Tragedy
    But at what cost?

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    jam4muzic commented on The Perfect Teenage Tragedy

    08-05-2009

    Hm...hm. It was ohhkay. I actually liked the ending the best 'When she knows she's dying...'. I don't get why it's a tragedy. She knew she was dying so she'd rather make it faster by killing herself basically. Yup. Mind checking out my poems? I'm new and want to know other's opinions.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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