the poet and the gun

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    This is from a script I wrote. The short film has yet to be shot.

    the poet and the gun


    Filtering through my senses I can see no other dream…

    This life escapes me as does the meaning of the hour…

    My broken world hangs like burnt skin and there is little to be thankful

    for except my intentions…

    My awful remorse will go unnoticed…


    This final moment passes through my veins like sour wine...

    Your song has faded and this ancient hour is gone...

    I say my last farewell blaming the sun and the moon and the rain...

    And I blame God; the most wretched of us all...

      

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    PoetsofBlood commented on the poet and the gun

    01-07-2010

    Amo, Amo, is all we need, Blood Blood for us to feed, Alexia...

    SILKYTWEED commented on the poet and the gun

    06-26-2009

    Strong Write....to me this write speaks of a writers sorrow and frustration with the world beyond his control....thanks for sharing!

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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