The Sun Rose.

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Not every one got to see the sun today.

The Sun Rose.

 

The sun rose creating the day.
 Nothing new, just rutine , work, same old chores, some what boring.
 Wold you know?
 But wait... what if you pay attention to details, like a bird in mid-fly, a conversation between stranges on the bus,the train.
Would you know? 
 It may change your day!, get it uplifted by a stranger with whom you exchange hellos ,either in an elevetor, the store or coffe shop...   
 Or maybe you pay a littel more attention in the meetting or the conferenes, or to your client, patner, worker,boss. You learned something new, usefull to you in life or work.
 Would you Know?
Or you actually her your wife, husban, doaughter or son, you lisented and her under the chatter, the meaning , their feelings when they toll you : " I have a new friend...I need money... I broke my toy... do you want to play with me today?... the car payment is due!...dinner is early don't be late..., you actually heard " we love you... we need you... we miss you."
Would you know?
All the things that you can find out if you took the time and pay attention to the little things around ...like the sun Rose today

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Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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