The Three Rooms of Him

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This is old. I just wanted to have something to post. :)

The Three Rooms of Him

There’s a red room that holds my veins
and where my tattered wings hang from chains
and a corner where my halo rests.

There’s a blue room that holds my tears
and washes away my simple fears
and down a drain they fall.

There’s a green room that holds emotions
and throws away love and devotion
and keeps envy and hatred instead.

In these rooms, an angel falls,
and naked I lay along the walls
for I cannot hold myself up
without my wings.

And when I leave these rooms behind,
I’ll no longer have a selfless mind,
for angels only last so long
inside a devil’s home.

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JanCharles commented on The Three Rooms of Him

08-05-2009

This is a fine poem, you have a lot of feeling and the ability to express it. Keep writing!

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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