THE TRUE ME

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    THE TRUE ME


    sumtimes i feel im alone
    like i have noone to hold onto
    then came you
    you fufill my dreams
    and make my wishes come true
    but still im hurt inside
    is it beacase i never recieved
    this kind of love from any guy???
    sumtimes i ask why??? i lay on my bed
    and cry and cry
    feeling like i wanna roll over and die
    you told me not to cry no more
    and said you loved me now
    and like you did before
    but theres more...
    i have pain in my heart and it hurts
    to the core
    i gave you my heart and beg you to take
    away this pain
    i know we go through the storm and rain
    but i love you so much my heart goes insane
    just please please take away my pain
    Cheylaina Teressa Eaddy

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    Jonzes commented on THE TRUE ME

    02-10-2009

    DEEP!!! I love the feelings that you let out on this. I would love to read more of your work if you have others.
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    writerspassion commented on THE TRUE ME

    01-23-2009

    BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!!
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    bforibus commented on THE TRUE ME

    01-22-2009

    damn, you almost made me cry. it was sooo emotionally sincere, i can't even put to many words to it. i loved the despair. the hope. and the acceptance, that only one person could do it. but did u kno that one person is you. great read. gimme some mor
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