The Ultimate Words Spoken

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    The Ultimate Words Spoken

    You have made the most lasting impression on me.
    I can never forget the most soul-touching words spoken so loud and crystal clear through the silence between two people's breath
    in just a matter of seconds.

    The emotions felt in that moment can only to me be
    described as the "Ultimate" words spoken
    with absolutely no sound,
    which was the beat of our hearts
    communicating and connecting.

    I want us to share more moments like that,
    'cause I am,
    without a doubt,
    in love with you.

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    casp1 commented on The Ultimate Words Spoken

    12-13-2009

    very nice moving poem...i love the raw emotion of your work....

    countrypoet commented on The Ultimate Words Spoken

    03-19-2009

    Very nice romantic poem.Good job.

    lonewolf commented on The Ultimate Words Spoken

    02-20-2009

    very nice romantic, and heartfelt poem.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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