The Way I Feel

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The Way I Feel

I feel like a plane,
Flying away from me.
I fell like I want to cry,
Like a baby.
I feel like I'm mad,
Full of raging fire.
I feel like a bird,
I can fly higher and higher.
I feel like I'm sad,
Tears coming down my face.
I feel like a cold hard brick,
In a fireplace.
I feel like I'm a happy clown,
I feel like I'm disapointed with a frown.
Those are my feelings I have shared with you.
What are your feelings?
Come on I told you!!


 

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DatKyd commented on The Way I Feel

11-05-2010

then u understand sum of my feelings

hdmac commented on The Way I Feel

08-22-2009

Your poem is spinning and spinning into a spiral. I can't seem to grasp what you mean because you go from being a brick to a clown to a frown.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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