The wrong kind of right.

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    The wrong kind of right.

    You told me I read you wrong
    That if given a chance you would make me strong.

    You said I read to deep into shit,
    You said, it didn't matter how quick you let me hit.

    You said I'm judging you because, you got six kids
    And that you have changed, from all the things I heard you did.

    You said you good now, just give us a try,
    You said I would regret it, If I let you pass me by.

    You said you wouldn't cheat, and that you have left that all behind,
    And It would be a great move, if I would decide to make you mine.

    "Just give me a chance" you said " Just give me a chance and you will see"
    How you could make me a better man, how you could make me happy.

    So I listen to you, and committed, and you soon turned my days to night,
    Althought I hate being wrong, This time what hurts is...

    I was right.

    Titus Ashley -

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    ccslim commented on The wrong kind of right.

    02-16-2009

    Ow, poke me in the eye brother! Lol Good job!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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