This is My Good-Bye

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    This is My Good-Bye
    If you're reading this
    Then it's probably too late
    I finally found a way to escape
    This wasn't my first choice
    But the only thing
    That would get my point across
    This isn't a game
    Though I'm played with like a toy
    So made the decision to just end it
    I'm wasting everyone's time
    So this poem is my way
    of saying Good-Bye
    To everyone who really cared
    And Good-Bye
    To the one who made me cry
    The one who made me hurt
    The one who made me want to die
    This time was the last
    The crying, hurt, and dieing inside
    Are a part of my past
    So now I hope that
    You are happy I'm gone
    And out of your life
    So to everyone who cares
    I'm sorry I didn't get to tell you
    How much I truly care
    I'm ready now to say Good-Bye
    Not only to him
    But to myself
    And my friends and family too

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    Utopia666999 commented on This is My Good-Bye

    03-30-2009

    Painful the final goodbye isn't it, though I spose it depends on where the next step takes you, good poem.
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    magicmanzz commented on This is My Good-Bye

    02-09-2009

    don't give up on yourself god doesn't give us anything we can't handle. what would you say if your child told you that they didn't live anymore your heart would fall apart and you'd think it was your fault. please think b-4 you do anything you cant
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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