This Life

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This Life

I would give up this life without  any remorse,
 without no second thought or even a choirs.
As I have forsaken my life with bitter sorrow
 Like the night given up the dawn of tomorrow.
I asked to be judged by a court of appeals
 like a dying soul not wanting to be healed.
I try to look for the silver lining
 but my eyes are weak and my heart is dying.
I wish for death like a solider in war
 not worrying about my life as my life is no more.

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Brittany024 commented on This Life

05-27-2009

again, another touching great poem that just draws you in while reading... very good! keep it up!............

ladypoet commented on This Life

05-27-2009

This is deep, it sounds like a personal thought you once had. Nice word choice. Stay safe sweetheart.. and you can contact me when ever -Lady P.

juggalo4life commented on This Life

05-27-2009

i love your poem...it is very touching...it really speaks to me...it makes me i don't know...it's just that good

Zionking commented on This Life

05-27-2009

you poem is very touching. i love . it feel like you are talk to me in this poem. i have feel ths way so many years.

mistyparish commented on This Life

05-27-2009

I have felt this way many times. This is very touching and I like it a lot. Keep up the good writes.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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