Through Panthium Segulee Oseddi comes for Desmotti

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Through Panthium Segulee Oseddi comes for Desmotti

Through the doorway day into night...
he strolls into darkness where most take to fright...
but his fight is with shadow for shadow hides he...
that King of the wretched holds with him one key...

That opens the vault that holds one within...
The King of Worms who's spirit is dim...
A son has come at last to set free...
A Father who's never met son Oseddi...

A child of the Brightstar a warrior of fire...
Who brings to the waste a truth amongst liars...
A truth to undo the pitiful Reign...
Of one King of Wretched Othalius Cain...

He walks with sure foot while monsters they hiss...
His sanities walls were fashioned in Bliss....
His royalty shows in his amaranthine Aura...
A child of the Bright star from the deeps of some Nebula...

"He doth come!" the harsh language heard...
From the whispers of darkness her warning was burned...
Into all the hideous minds that would witness...
The Fire child... here on the waste... he walks fearless...

O' King thy doom approaches thy gate...
We fear he that walks through your crimson waste...
without trepidation in any amount....
His energy burns us it flows like a fount......

We shrink from he that burns us with light....
We cannot abide...for all darkness must hide...
Oh King do something he searches for thee...
And the one you've imprisoned...The Great Desmotti....

Oh King be quick for one doth approach that has all the power...to silence thy throat...
and banish thy will to the crimson pools...
Be mindful Dark Lord you've broken His rules....
Be mindful Dark Lord the Laws of the Bright star...
bind all shadow that orbit the darkstars....

O Lord of Darkness you cannot abide...
Let the Worm go...from his light...we all hide.




 




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Rygar commented on Through Panthium Segulee Oseddi comes for Desmotti

10-05-2009

the anchor that keeps him stayed, is forged out of guilt of that one awful day, when physical touch was taken away, and Desmotti was left in the black and the grey.

DeepEclipse commented on Through Panthium Segulee Oseddi comes for Desmotti

09-22-2009

Gorgeous to see, for the words that you speak only feed the enigma at which he is peaked. The mind is like torment, a torment that's filled with a passion for pain and extravegant skill. It pours upon dreams, expanding the lines, demanding the truth and unraveling lies. So here I salute he that knows well the fight........perhaps the wastes lie in the day of the night...

ZechAntioch

09/23/2009

I'm greatful at your appreciation of a world being built in truth " In creation" I would gather your thoughts in a pool of safe keeping...for the time comes to many when I'm blank when I'm thinking. I wish to ask what one doth dream if one such as you desire answers that beam....for the wastes are a secret...slowly unlocked...like bodies from murders ideas outlined and chalked.

PoetWithCancer commented on Through Panthium Segulee Oseddi comes for Desmotti

08-29-2009

This poem is so very rich in possible meanings. But it is more a poem of energies and feelings than of things. It is a story that grabbed me and carried me through to the end. // Is this based on some myth that somehow I failed to hear of? Or did you make up the entire thing? If a poem such as this cannot win, at least come close to winning, that shows the sad fact that popularity is driven by some engine other than merit.

ZechAntioch

08/30/2009

Thank you....this is going to be a book...I have been testing the Characters here on chat to see the response...Desmotti is a Dangerous character...but his son Oseddi is a Hero. The True villain is Othalius Cain...I appreciate your thoughts.

am2anangel commented on Through Panthium Segulee Oseddi comes for Desmotti

08-29-2009

Excellent write. Your flow and style are quite well done. I enjoyed the visual imagery you painted with your words. Very good piece.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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