To bathe in tears of Thunderclaps

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    To bathe in tears of Thunderclaps

     As the rain pours upon me washing the stink from exhausted skin...sweat from journey a constant...for the sun prevaileth on the hard pan....and mine journey is full of heat...treacherous heat...

    But...here it comes upon me now...I let the tears of thunderclaps wash my sweat lined and sand stained face... I embrace this wonderful feeling, the cleanse and renewal.... and gratefully I bathe in the very place I stand.

    I watch the scape come alive with creatures, moments before, hidden from the careful eyes of the lone mortal who walks in search of the Doorway. 

    " I am not alone." I think quietly with smile breaking wide... I take it in...remembering bits of verse...-infinite creations...each unique and with spirit...for they exist and are intelligent...all mortality set into existence within their specific spheres of Glory...

    and here I stand so small and singular...with bright eyes wet with mine own tears of joy...for heaven dwelleth even here...with me...for a moment I am not alone...on this journey.

    Oseddi

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    rougepriest commented on To bathe in tears of Thunderclaps

    10-13-2009

    wow.....................................................
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    DeepEclipse commented on To bathe in tears of Thunderclaps

    10-07-2009

    I sense much within this.....a deeply appreciative poem, or a poem that has re-found the feelings of appreciation. For a moment, the fight is put to rest and the moment is embraced. To feel the rain. To see the beauty of creation. To see oneself as a something that came from nothing, instead of being something heading into nothing. The coin is flipped, the sides are switched, and humbleness brings even the greatest aggression to its knees... if only for a moment.
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    cliftondurant commented on To bathe in tears of Thunderclaps

    09-22-2009

    this is beautiful yes we are never alone nice read keep up the good work
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    Rygar commented on To bathe in tears of Thunderclaps

    09-05-2009

    deep , thought provoking, great imagery and an easy flow that made it an enjoyable read. nice job!
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    ZechAntioch

    09/07/2009

    Thank you I appreciate you taking the time.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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