TOO YOUNG THEN

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TOO YOUNG THEN

I was too young then, don't remember when,
At first didn't knew what would be the end
I held your hand, and make amend,
Later my hand, behind your head, leading you to bend,

Didn't knew that paradise is not in there,
Thought heaven is a place there in that corner,
I hope that time i could make you feel better,
but then again, now it's all over,

I was too young then to realize,
that you brought things to me, good and nice,
neither of us knew, we will end in lies,
now both of us look, to the promise of every sunrise,

Too many seasons had passed,
too much heartaches surpassed,
now i am here again at last,
knowing nothing but the past,

I was too young then to understand,
that you alone can make me stand,
without the you who blazes my glands,
to pressures, not enough of me can do withstand,

I miss the days, i am that so innocent not to know,
that i am wasting those moments with you that are snow,
and now, not so young to fear and face the sorrows,
I wish i could go back to our life then, made of hollows,

When i cannot say i miss you,
I will say i miss the me when i'm with you,
Or say i miss him, and if you'll wonder who,
I miss him, i miss the man i was, with you...

 

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optimistic commented on TOO YOUNG THEN

12-21-2010

Great write excellent time to think about good time.

Jaymarkreynon

08/05/2011

Thanks! With my current work right now, i really find it hard to write again. anyway, thanks for inspiring me to write again!!!

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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HOPELESSNESS AND WISHFUL THINKING 0
TOO YOUNG THEN 1
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