TWO WORLDS APART (Sea and Land)

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This was the 5th poem I ever written in my entire existence...a very special one...duh...actually it pop in my mind when I read a biography of a famous person some century ago...a very sad life story... waaahhhh...just thinking of it...I wanna cry...sniff...sniff...though it may sounds very different...really...

TWO WORLDS APART (Sea and Land)

Sea…a place of calmness yet sometimes unpredictable

Land…a place of safety yet sometimes unreliable.

Two worlds apart… yet have to be together

For one common reason…for the good of other.

 

Sea…it gives everyone a warm feeling

Land…it supports them to survive the daily living.

These worlds do the things for the created

And…yet cannot have what they wanted.

 

Both love each other with an intention so pure

Yet the union is taboo…so it forbid by nature

Why? Ask the Sea, “Am I no right to be happy?”

Murmured the land, “Is happiness only for them excluding me?”

 

Nature’s thought, “If I am to be asked from deep down in my heart…

I won’t be a hinder, let your love spark…

Nature’s word, “But this idea of love is detestable…

We just have to accept…this fateful.

 

In conclusion to this event

The Land and Sea continued…recurrent

Focusing in helping the needy

Forgetting their selfishness…their vanity

 

But yet in their senses…they promise

“The ‘another lifetime’ won’t be like this…”

He would have him and him to he

For their love is an eternity.

 

But for now allow the reality…

Though in the dream keep the fantasy

Until then they need to space out

For they are two worlds apart.

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jtlove commented on TWO WORLDS APART (Sea and Land)

08-09-2010

Interesting. I always saw it as a wonderful working relationship. Complimenting one another beautifully. And when those waves crash upon the shore they are making love.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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