Unconditional Love

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Unconditional Love

Honesty, trust, forgiveness all the time
at my side at all times
during the good and bad times
Loving arms around me constantly holding me
A touch like no other
Bringing a smile to my face
Listening to my crys, protecting me
from my fears
Holding me close during my darkest times
who could ask for more
That soothing voice
Those words of wisdom
Helping me through
Those eye's all knowing
keeping me in sight at all times
who, you ask is this
so perfect so true
no man of course
but a father to me and you

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DeepEclipse commented on Unconditional Love

05-27-2010

Ah I like how you switched that around. Not the sensual expectency. It became heightened at the end. It can only be a father's love for his children that he tolerates us as He does. Enjoyed the read.

gregster commented on Unconditional Love

05-26-2010

read his pain our salvation from my list please.....you are an awesome poet

Sx9 commented on Unconditional Love

12-16-2009

he is indeed,,verry holy ,sincear vibes,,love this..

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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