Untrained Love

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    Untrained Love

    This love I have its getting severe. This love I have is making me fear. This love I have feels so untamed. Like a bear that has'nt been trained. This love I have is so unsure. This love I have seems so unpure This love I have feels so untrue. This love I have makes me blue. This love I have feels so unreal. This love I have has no thrill. This love I have is so sad. This love I have will end real bad.

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    Worthless commented on Untrained Love

    03-09-2011

    That's funny and so true! the love i have is rare and unique and I am no longer given it to anybody...

    dumplin commented on Untrained Love

    10-28-2009

    Wow, that's the quickest relationship I think I've ever read about. LOL Nice flow!

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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