what I hide

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what I hide

I read a poem just today. And it made me think of that day.The day I accepeted God into my life And I remember all his pain and strife. Now I have went astray.God forgive me is what I pray.What have I got to hide.I hide the lord cause of this worldly pride. I know relize as these tears form into my eyes.I dont need this worldly pride. My mother is now down on her knees beging the lord to watch over me.All I have done is make him bleed insted of them percing his side now its me.I pray to God save me. As I fall upon my knees. What have I got to hide? Nothing now I've swolled my pride. Joseph vinson

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Worthless commented on what I hide

03-09-2011

well written...

kochab commented on what I hide

08-09-2009

fairly well put together and thoughts were to the point. Good work joe

jacque2sweet commented on what I hide

08-09-2009

Really made me think of how I live my life and what I need to do to feel God again. thanx

joewv

08/09/2009

we all need a reminder sometimes

cliftondurant commented on what I hide

08-09-2009

JOE i love it yes we need God in our life oh what joy it bring to our soul you be bless

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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