These Feelings
These feeling that I have,have caught me by surprise.It happens to me everytime I look into you'r eye's. I know we haven't been around each other all that long. But when I am around you my heart sings a song. Theres a song that comes into my mind. It's a country song and its called do I. My heart tell me that this is for the best. But my mind is what make me put you to the test. It makes me fear it makes me cry.When your mad I want to die. I wan't happiness not sorrow or pain. I know sometime's this is a mental drain. We pull out of these problem that life throws at our feet. Cause if there's if thing i'm not good at that would be defeat.These Feelings
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kochab commented on These Feelings
08-09-2009
- love is a hard thing to write about sometimes, I think that you did well.
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cliftondurant commented on These Feelings
08-09-2009
- beautiful love poem it's great to fall in love and have that love return good job
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Vincent commented on These Feelings
08-09-2009
- cool poem, my only suggestion is meter smiles Vincent
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