Upon Natures Path

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    Upon Natures Path

    Upon natures path I followed green
    My thoughts provoked lovely dream
    The leaves of gold from autumn's tint
    Had dyed their tresses lovely mint
    Dressed in moss its mourning cloak
    My eyes beheld a broaden oak
    Limbs without falter held each nest
    Sheltered rain from feathered guest
    Strong and sturdy, weeping still
    With splendor on a grassy hill
    Velvet blades caught acorn tears
    Solitary comfort through barren years
    Furry friends have come and gone
    Spent seedlings they have feasted on
    Pinched myself to wake from sleep
    To realize truth of masterpiece
    For beauty of true nature lies
    Not in your dreams, but in your eyes

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    quickwrite commented on Upon Natures Path

    09-12-2009

    Very nicely written poem, keep up the good work...

    lightcourier commented on Upon Natures Path

    05-04-2009

    Really liked this. Nice rhyme and din't seem to overpower the work. Easy to read and uses a lot of nice phrasing. 2nd line missing an A? never mind! Good stuff..Enjoyed reading Thanks!

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