Waiting by the phone.

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    Poem Commentary

    This is my first poem for others to read.  I hope you find it amusing.  Took about 25 minutes to write..

    Waiting by the phone.

    Waiting by the phone.

    Sitting here alone.

    Waiting for the call.

    That will change it all.

     

    Days have come and gone.

    With the ringer on.

    Sitting here alone.

    Waiting by the phone.

     

    Thought it all went good.

    As I understood.

    It was time well spent.

    Said what I had meant.

     

    Please just let me know.

    If I need to go.

    Look some other way.

    To improve my pay.

     

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    KristyLoren commented on Waiting by the phone.

    08-28-2009

    Nicely rhyme and well written. I've been there by the phone waiting, I know what that's like. I didn't connect with the last stanza. But over all a very well crafted. Keep writing.

    hvyrmtl1

    08/28/2009

    I was just waiting to hear the i got the job, thats all.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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