Waiting on Tomorrow

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    Waiting on Tomorrow
    WAITING ON TOMORROW:

    Frozen in the rain,
    Waiting on tomorrow,
    Washing my sins away with her memory,
    Soaking my skin; leaving it brittle to the touch,

    Frozen in the rain,
    Tomorrow passes to tomorrow,
    Unable to move,
    Reeling of pain from skin to bone,
    Waiting on tomorrow; but tomorrow never comes.


    By: Richard C. Hobbs

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    bloomingsun commented on Waiting on Tomorrow

    11-15-2009

    Hi. I read all your work and find your style to be really appealling. I like the simplicity of it and the meaningful imagery. Nice work. This one is my fave.
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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