Water II

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    Water II

    what can harm me
    nothing lately enter life
    daily bravely, to die
    is to settle cowardly
    No! No! I 'm here to break
    life open all secrets revealed
    unto me I'll boldly leave with
    much wisdom of infinite eternity
    graciously a given gift should be given
    my broken corps from the ashes
    water gushes past my newly born lashes
    the ocean beats the rocks with sighs and crashes
    oh queen of nothingness can not die
    far beyond a thought less cry 
    birds won't chirp the lark still sings
    for as long as she sings the buzzards won't
    swing down for a treat..... what waits beneath
    her lids who will bid to keep her from
    sinking to the pit " I did." said the traveler
    lost in thought "I've tasted the leaky lids
    and have been summoned before the
    beauty rots!" a command "Wet salty substance
    leave her clean wash her leave her, certain wind
    without drought........ just refreshed, true. Let's see
    what a self belief can do!" H
                                         2
                                         O ( Has Time Opportune?).......
    WATER TOO.  So cry when you need proof.

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    dahlusion commented on Water II

    07-06-2009

    This piece is so rich in vivid imagery, poetic phrasing, and luscious movement that i could not stop reading it. Great write!!

    StandingBear commented on Water II

    07-03-2009

    Anderia, when i read the title "water ll" i'd to get a long cool drink of water before sitting down and enjoying your fine work. Great write.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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