We. Us. Our.

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    This is dedicated to what once was a close friend. Found a girl. And left me in the dust. We used to not be able to spend more than a day apart, and know he hasn't talked to me in months. 

    We. Us. Our.
    We used to be close,
    We could share the love
    And our experiences
    Of what lies above.

    No need for explanations,
    We understand one another.
    We adventure into explorations
    As we strive off each other.

    But that has long expired.
    Our friendship's nothing
    Compared to the one you call yours.

    You no longer need me
    Or our late night phone calls.
    But how can this be
    When I desperately need you? 

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    EditUndO commented on We. Us. Our.

    12-27-2009

    I like this a lot. a lot of people could relate to it
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