Whalers

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Nope, haven't been out to see for more than a day, haven't seen a whale up close either. :D

Whalers

 

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To believe or not to

To believe a little but not much

Tried this path before

To seas untouched

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Bothered by grace

Of the heavens above

Deceived before

Learned the lot

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Is your heart true

This time around?

It was not at all, before

Or is it still too hard?

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I was hurt before

An issue of mistrust

A good advice

Of wordplay you moved around

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The seas are moving

An appalling sight

A large fish! A large fish

Under the ship and around

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Is this my chance

To catch a big catch

And feed the innocent

Of your distasteful lust

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''Bring out the harpoons!”

“Bring out the larger ones!”

“The same items she bore

Are the same things we have “

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“Man the sails! Every man on deck!

See her rise and fall

Hurling the salt and the air,

Ranting out there!”

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 “Take heed men!

This be our chance!

Fish are caught through nets

Hook her and watch”

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''Should we shoot now, sir'

Now while her wounds are fresh?''

Harpoons are with rope

Awaiting eyes and ears to detest

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“Be still men, all is about timing!”

“Check to see if her wounds are deep”

Enough to kill as we hurled her

So we can finally have her meat!”

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''She is but weak, sir!

No contest to the deep!''

“Men, we may be strong,

But her size may be as big as her id! “

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  “Ay-ay Capt’n! We’ll check and see”

“The ship can take her, we believe!”

Just then she rose, as big as her eyes could be

Looked at us and tried swimming away to sea

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  “Follow her, men.

Don’t let her get away!”

“Her crimes should not to be forgiven

Your captain should not sleep tonight in dismay!”

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  “Fasten yourself to the ship

Come at her and take your prize

Don’t let her go too deep

The harpoons may reach the heap

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  And then the whale came up

Seeking no wisdom from the wise

Gave the ship a large wave

 But failure moreover struck her pride

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  She’s ought to say, “I got more”

The men then say, “Do try”

“We are fastened and ready

To walk the plank and die!"

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  “Be strong, men,

Victory will come”

“These wall of seas and salt

Will ne’er take us apart!”

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  She hurled and cried

Short of a forever rant

“Come hear, filthy fish!”

The old captain replied.

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  Harpoons would not kill her

Not without the unison of the lot

She will not fall

Without our strengths combined

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  “Shoot now, men!”

“Shoot with everything we got!”

The whale cried bellowingly loud

In reply to the captain’s echoing shout!

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   “Shoot her with the harpoons!”

Man the cannons and continue

Until not a single knife is left out

And the sea turned into a reddish hue

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  The men in unison hurled and shot

Till the deck was only smoke and ash

“Ay-ay Capt’n there would be no stopping

Until she falls, this day will not pass.”

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We are whalers!

6:10 AM

Realizing your lies and deceit will come soon.

 

 

 

 

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ClearlySays commented on Whalers

01-23-2011

Okay all I can say OH MY GOD. In a good way lol! I can taste the your anger, not only is she a whale! But you brought a whole damn team to bring her ass down. Good work!

sequelrio

02/16/2011

Glad you liked it! :D - Some of my office mates would really laugh when they hear that someone can relate to us. Oh...btw, I think she'll be removed to the account and I can't say I am sorry for her. LOL.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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