What never was

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    What never was

      
    dreamt a dream a dream of love with flows and balloons with it was a wedding you see but not for you and me for someone unknown whom i will never see then sailing we were over land and sea to find at the end of the journey no mystery but just life as it was meant to be

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    daniel081180 commented on What never was

    07-01-2009

    i enjoyed the poem. great read good job. hope to read more from you.
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    ValentineD

    07/10/2009

    thanx

    BooTz commented on What never was

    06-30-2009

    kinda sad but i like it. it's kinda like reachin for summin u want so bad that's not there or u can't have. good piece
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    WinterFrost commented on What never was

    06-30-2009

    Some comma's or breaking it into stanza's would make an easier Read. But the meat of the poem is good.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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