When we leave a Place

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When we leave a Place

When we leave a Place

 

I believe that when we leave a place part of it goes with us and part of us remains; go anywhere in that place when it is quit and just listen after a while you will hear the echo’s of all our conversations every thought and word we exchange long after we are gone our voices will linger in those walls for as long as this place remains, but I must admit my heart will always miss the part of you that is gone.

 

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Lucho commented on When we leave a Place

07-14-2009

I like this poem. I know exactly what you are talking about because I have moved around a bunch and have left many friends behind. The only things that I have caught in the poem is I think there is a typo at "place remains" and "will always". I think that sounds better. Keep up the good work and check out my poems and let me know what you think

rl3311

07/14/2009

Thank you so much for you checking me out

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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