Who are you?

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    Who are you?

    To find time for my thoughts, I walked away
    To a place for me, but it wasn't meant for today
    A lovely sent caught me, bringing me to a daze
    And what I saw next, I will surly remember for many days
    Goddess like perfection, curves meant to hold
    Hips seemingly crafted from a heavenly fold
    smooth sexy stomach with a gem that gave a glow
    And marked by a tatted rose, added for extra show
    Her lips, were longed by anyone who glanced
    Her hazel eyes so beautiful, no man had a chance
    long silky hair, that splayed down her back, irresistible
    drop dead gorgeous, I had to get next to her
    Stopped by the chains of my own fear
    I stood and watched her dissapear
    clouded by the chatter of the busy mall, I stood stunned
    Who are you, dearest angel, and could you have been the one

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    orbits4 commented on Who are you?

    09-03-2009

    You're a true poet. Your talent shows. Excellent imagery. I want to see more.

    HoneyHued commented on Who are you?

    01-14-2009

    I loved this, very charming.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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