Why Leave Me Here To Die

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  • Lost Love

    Why Leave Me Here To Die

    The day you said good bye,
    I felt something in me die,
    I don't want you to see me cry,
    Why leave me here to die?

    You walked away
    I knew without a dout
    You weren't turning back,
    I had lost you

    When you left
    I knew I would regret that day,
    But I was to scared to say,
    'please don't go away'

    Now I stand here
    cold, friendless, and without love
    One day I will see you again
    If it be the will of the one above

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    Godsgang commented on Why Leave Me Here To Die

    06-15-2009

    A poem should roll of the lips, but this seens a little disjointed lacks rhmye in places , but still a good effort

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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