Why me

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    Why me

     Sometimes I wonder why me?
    My friends have left and gone away.
    My boyfriend hasleft and gone to war to serve his country for the pour. And still I wonder why me?
    I sit in a four cornered room in the house and wonder why my life has left me. I am but a shadow on the wall no where to run no where to crawl. My life seems unfair, crooked and mean, Or am I just thinking of something thoughtless and unseen? The world is trashed from hatered and pollution and still no one cares about the revolution. And still I wonder why me? The war is over and the battle too and still no word. So here I sit in a shadow of a four cornered box without no friends, love or feelings. Still I wonder why me?

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    TamiG76 commented on Why me

    05-21-2009

    OUCH!!!!!! This one hurts on so many levels!!!!! Okay, you did a wonderful job writing this. The picture is painted clearly for all who read it. The imagery and inflection are also good. I look forward to reading more of your stuff.
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    heartoftears

    05/28/2009

    Thamk you so very much I will be putting more up soon

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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