Why?

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  • Lost Love

    Why?

    There was something about you
    That I couldn't quite place
    I never did doubt you
    Till I saw it in your face
    That's when I knew we would part
    In that one moment of lust
    You shattered my heart
    When you took that man's thrust
    Now my heart lies still
    It's been ground into dust
    Half of me in fear
    The other in disgust
    You said you loved me
    And like a fool I did believe
    Why did you do that to me
    My heart now on my sleeve
    I hate you for the fact
    In that one moment you knew
    Even after you did the act
    I will always love you

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    ivecute77 commented on Why?

    11-17-2008

    I felt your pain, written well, great poem.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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