Will you wait for me?

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Will you wait for me?

Never ending
sleepless pending
waiting to see
what your future will be

We're stuck underground
Only that fact is sound
standing in line
looking for a sign
that you may end up happy

No sun will shine
on this morbid rhyme
for as you can see
sadness lies in me

Wait for the the gate
as you slow your heartrate
death has come

you will finally be
eternally free

Will you wait for me?

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rayray6593 commented on Will you wait for me?

01-05-2010

love they way you munipulate the words to do your biding they are kinda like your betch in the way you can screw them, beat them and get them to do what you want then to...jk but you are emmas freind right? if so nice to meet u.

drama4life01 commented on Will you wait for me?

12-28-2009

You read this for language class, right? *meli*

kalel commented on Will you wait for me?

12-11-2009

Geez! Dark but wonderful, I know where to go next time I'm looking for a good cry, thank you for sharing.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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