Words or only words

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    Words or only words

    If I could I would, share the thoughts of my mind pertaining to what I describe as a ray of sunshine, that rare pearl, the jewel of the nile. But how can I speak about something or someone that even disapears with style.Was it a dream or dreams. I ask myself where did my words go, the majic of the pen , the silver lining of my tounge that expresses the memory of a vision that raps me in it's sesitivity, bringing me into tranquility. Imprisonning me, like daniel in the lions den, yet hypnotising my mind, convincing the sences of a false security. Give me loose or give me misery, if loving you is wrong. bring my words back tonight. Let me write, let me share, let met speak. PLease, please before I die, someone tell me the truth. take away the vanity and the powerlessness that has restrained my tounge from manifesting the shout out of my heart. Keeping me bound to being misunderstood , mistaken, unseen by this vision of my dreams. Aiking ,Quaking, Oh My Aiking ,Quaking, Oh My Aiking ,Quaking, Oh My Aiking ,Quaking,

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    CorinnaRose commented on Words or only words

    01-23-2009

    Wow, this is a very powerful poem and I love the reference to Daniel here. My favorite line is "take away the vanity and powerlessness that has restrained my tongue from manifesting the shout out of my heart". Very beautiful poem :)

    writerspassion commented on Words or only words

    01-20-2009

    I really liked this one. Anyone love writting anything should read this

    bforibus commented on Words or only words

    01-18-2009

    i felt the misery and the love. defintely a very gud read.

    libra46 commented on Words or only words

    01-18-2009

    A very intense poem ,with strong feeling. I like it and keep writing.

    beautifuldeath commented on Words or only words

    01-18-2009

    very vivid. nicely done

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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