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  • Lost Love

    Words

    I think of how I love you
    without restraint
    without thinking
    Unconditionally

    You made me feel like I was whole
    a part of me returned
    a piece was missing
    without knowing

    But then everything changed
    in the blink of an eye
    who would have guessed
    the end would come like this?

    Now I'm left to wonder
    the love I felt for you was real
    and you said the words
    but did you ever feel them?

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    corrine commented on Words

    09-28-2009

    You wrote some key words as to the real feelings of love that I also have written about. Love is out there it is just hard to fine the right kind that can benefit yourself and the other person too.

    leny commented on Words

    12-03-2008

    I can relate to this. I have also a poem which conveys the same feeling. Its nice.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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