Worst Day Of My Life

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    Worst Day Of My Life

     Today is the worst day of my life
    Ifeel like jumping in water and taking a dive
    I feel shallow not myself
    It hard not to cry but yet i try
    I feel weak not strongh and whole
    I need a helping hand to touch me to feel better.

    Today is the worst day of my life
    I cant deal and i cannot feel
    I dont understand what's going on
    My body is shaking and my hands are weak
    My eyes are tired but yet i cannot sleep
    I cry till my eyes hurt amd yet i cry some more
    My stomach's sick and feels like it's playing tricks.

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    honesty34 commented on Worst Day Of My Life

    06-26-2009

    I really enjoyed this poem...this is exactly how i feel sometimes..
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    crazy4writing

    06/26/2009

    thank you very much i was in a bad state of mind when i wrote that.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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