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    YOU

    You came into my world warm and slowly
    As the clouds through a rising sun.
    We then met and before our eyes, adagio made us one.

    You’ve imbued your love and precious gifts
    Giving me insights to your soul.
    And through your hands you expressed yourself
    As angelic as the wings of a dove.

    We’ve gone through it all as lovers do,
    But much more as devoted friends.
    It’s what keeps us so intact and amorous,
    From now to whenever comes our end.

    Taking in all He has bestowing our way,
    Embracing all trials and tribulations the same.
    Becoming more and more as one through strength,
    Whatever come what may.

    As I look upon your gazing eyes with memories near and far,
    It’s love that glows carefree, just as the shining stars.
    Its sheer beauty to know that my heart has opened to one so true
    I know that God has lit up my world, through the presence of YOU.

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    FiloRozzell commented on YOU

    05-13-2009

    Are you writing to me? Just kidding but you seem so loving. Nice expression...

    SILKYTWEED commented on YOU

    05-07-2009

    Excellent, reading YOU gave my stomach flutters....to me that is a sign that it is felt...Thank you for sharing such a wonderful expression!

    Phoenix9 commented on YOU

    01-01-2009

    Oh this deserves so much more,you are a very talented writer, you have touched me, thank you

    edward123 commented on YOU

    12-20-2008

    hello my name is howard rice Iam a singer songwriter/producer what you have is beautiful words foe a song go to my website www.freewebs.com/howardrice and also go to www. myspace.com/howarderice to hear my voice you have a gift,so keep it up.you take

    loyalpoet commented on YOU

    11-17-2008

    We may live far away from each other but yet we are so close in spirit. I have been there where you are in this poem. I feeel that I'm a devouted friend to this women but we are lover and depend on each other as if we are husband and wife. you keep w

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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