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    you

    Lusciously beautiful is the love for you gleaming bright in my eyes,
    With every breath of fresh air and flaming sunrise
    Feeling ever to great to explain with a size
    Thanking God for every moment in life, every gift from our lord to me is a prize.
    As I am for you to mend your cries
    We can be together forever even after our body here dies.
    Our spirits flying freely through the beautiful blue skies!

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    BlacknWhite commented on you

    04-21-2009

    I like this a lot. Very moving.

    MissElRene commented on you

    04-18-2009

    Great word usage, you painted vivid pictures with your words. NICE! PROPS...

    mistyparish commented on you

    04-17-2009

    I like the spiritual connection in this. It is very good.

    keisha47 commented on you

    04-14-2009

    i like this, if i've never read your biography, i'd think this was done professionally... :)

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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