Guided by an unseen star

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  • Confusion

    Guided by an unseen star

    Guided by an unseen star

    Living life already failed,
    Being a failure you know you cant fail.
    Making things better with everything to gain
    Slowly succeeding fearing failure,
    Is it all in my brain?
    All is gained fearing successfully being able to maintain.
    Excessive effort not failing your gain,
    Is it all worth it just to maintain?
    All this confusion built up in my brain,
    Just one mistake and failure erasing my entire gain.
    Is everything better?
    I know when you’re a failure you don’t feel this much pain.
    If using was quitting and quitting was using then I know I could quit without going insane!


    Nottus mot

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    jim2009 commented on Guided by an unseen star

    09-05-2009

    man this sounds like my life story from beginning to the end..i couldn't have put it no other way.thanks

    cassius commented on Guided by an unseen star

    04-21-2009

    i love this piece u are gifted keep writting

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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