" Can You Help Me "

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  • Friendship
    • magicmanzz
    • life is as short as a kiss and never lingering

    " Can You Help Me "

       Can  you help me find my heart,
       I think it's out in the rain.
      That's the only way i could think of,
      To wash away the pain...

      Can you help me find my smile,
      it's lost amoung  the tears.
     I pray I find it again someday,
     When  your goodbye disappers.

     Can you help me find my mind,
     It's gone to who knows where.
     I lost it when you said goodbye,
     Now being me's to hard to bear.

     Can you help me find myself,
     I've been gone way to long.
     I tried like hell to make it back,
     But your memory's just to strong.
     
    Can you help me find the strenght,
     To make it alone again.
     It'll be the hardest fight I've ever fought .
     But with your help i know i'll win....

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    Bobwelbaum commented on " Can You Help Me "

    05-29-2011

    That's a very nice sentiment and I thik it's well written (but I think I see some typos and capitalization inconsistencies).

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

    magicmanzz’s Poems (23)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    Jack daniel's you're my only friend 1
    " Can You Help Me " 1
    Yesterday's Callin' 2
    realization 9
    on a quiet sunday morning 5
    silence can kill the flame 8
    my heart can't believe in (maybe) 7
    my heart can't believe in (maybe) 2
    THAT WAS BEFORE YOU....... 5
    poetic toture 2
    your worth waiting for 3
    JEAN'S FOREVER......
    .....
    2
    An empty shell/ a living hell...... 3
    LET'S GO STROLLIN' 0
    REMINCSE OF A LONELY BROKEN HEART 2
    HEART WHERE ARE YOU NOW 3
    Junky's Showdown 1
    YOUR MEMORY 9
    THE LAST GOODBYE...... 5
    untitled 7
    TIME'S END........ 7
    search your heart,(you'll find me there) 12
    tears fall by the way 12