An empty shell/ a living hell......

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    • magicmanzz
    • life is as short as a kiss and never lingering

    An empty shell/ a living hell......

                      the house is cold and empty
                     now that you're not here with me
                     the roooms that once were filled with love
                     are only filled with memories
                     
                     the voice that once filled my head
                     now falls on silent ears
                      the words that were left unsaid
                      linger in my mouth like bitter tears.....
                     
                      i miss the kiss of your sweet lips
                     i long for your embrace
                        but the emptiness that fills my heart
                        time never can erase......
                        
                       a heart that once felt passion's fire
                       has turned cold as winter's touch
                       come rescuse mefrom lonely's reach
                       i need you oh so much
                      
                      the eyes that once saw  hopes and dreams
                      are now blind by wasted tears
                      a heart that once felt confidence
                      is prisoner now to doubt and fears
                     
                     a heart that once shared love's desire
                     the man that used to be
                     is an empty shell/ a living hell
                      that's all you left of me.............
                   
                   

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    wickedink commented on An empty shell/ a living hell......

    08-23-2009

    If your words are as true as you write how could anyone walk away from that? My heart goes out to you my friend!
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    magicmanzz

    08/24/2009

    wickedink i wear my heart on my sleeve so it's broken easily i'm not mr. universe or brad pitt but then they aren't me neither i am what i am just an easy-going guy from the south who been looking for love for years but i think it only exist in fairytales but thankz for the kind words and i still think ur hot later mark

    Shadowwalker commented on An empty shell/ a living hell......

    07-27-2009

    all words fall on deaf ears if they don't want to hear them. I know the pain.
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    magicmanzz

    07/28/2009

    i know more pain then anything so i've been there

    Tempy commented on An empty shell/ a living hell......

    07-21-2009

    i so understand this, but you have to speak up if you want to be heard communicate with your loved one
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    magicmanzz

    07/22/2009

    i scream in volumes buy the words fall on deaf ears...... silence is golden but sometimes it's hell

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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