JEAN'S FOREVER...........

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    • magicmanzz
    • life is as short as a kiss and never lingering

    JEAN'S FOREVER...........

                         jean called her lover to forever
                          bring your heart and come stay here with me
                          we'll touch the stars that light up the heavens
                           while we search to find love's long lost memory
                          
                           we'll share today, while we look to find tomorrow
                            we'll toss away the cold what used to bes
                            i'll start a fire ,time or tears can't extingish
                             a flame to burn throughout eternity.
                             
                              i'll whisper in love's moonlight softest shadows
                              to lay upon your face until the dawn
                               we'll capture moments time has long forgotten
                                and recall them when we feel we cant go on
                                
                                 we'll burn the bridge that reaches discontentment
                                 and cast away the bitter sad goodbyes
                                  whisper in the quiet mid-nite silence
                                  i'll shelter you from the storms of hurt and lies.
                                  
                                  i'll rescue you from angry resentment
                                  we'll sail out on the seas of compromise
                                 we'll walk along the sands of sweet forgiveness
                                  then leave behind the yesterdays  goodbyes....

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    charmlessman2d commented on JEAN'S FOREVER...........

    04-08-2010

    this poem plays out like a beautiful photograph of a couple on a moonlit beach or like a timeless oil painting. its that escapism we all seek and relish when we get even a glimpse of it. these sentences flowed like like a sweet breeze to match the imagery you've described here. very good write. i like how you took the time to capture the romance you felt with the woman you share this feeling with. goodjob. keep on writing!

    Katylove commented on JEAN'S FOREVER...........

    08-06-2009

    My 1st fave line We'll capture moments time has forgotten 2nd fave line we'll walk along the sands of sweet forgivness touching~

    magicmanzz

    08/06/2009

    t.y for your kind words i have more if you'd like to read them mark

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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