a boy in prayer

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    a boy in prayer

    one day woke up and walked out my door i walked down the street and what i seen was devistating i saw a little boy pray but all he could say was god and he began 2 cry i walked up 2 the little boy and asked him why he was crying he looked up at me crying and said my mom is going 2 die he asked me 2 pray with him so i began 2 pray and all i could do was say god and i began 2 cry the next day i walked out my door i saw the little boy he said thank you and he began 2 cry he said u saved my mom and then i began 2 cry the next day i walked out my door once more i saw the little boy and his mom i told her what he had said and she began 2 cry i told her how sorry i was and i began 2 cry once more she told me it will be ok and we all began 2 pray and we all began 2 cry she told me how thankful she was for all of my help but it all comes down 2 1 think god really helps

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    vancelemley commented on a boy in prayer

    09-15-2009

    absolutely loved it...you have a very unique and intriguing way of expression...

    federallawman commented on a boy in prayer

    08-28-2009

    Powerful poem, It shows so many things. Good job.

    Richisfun commented on a boy in prayer

    06-08-2009

    Very nice ! wait im crying, well maybe we all could cry together. Its very touching and makes me feel that we all should cry a little more

    lonewolf commented on a boy in prayer

    04-14-2009

    very powerful. enjoyed the read

    WordSlinger commented on a boy in prayer

    03-11-2009

    Lovely Poem, all comes down 2 1 think god really helps he sure does,

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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