A Dreamer

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if any read my poem "Youe Were Right" well this is like the conclusion,,like the second part to it

A Dreamer

It’s over like over the mountain
No turning back, the fall may hurt I could die,But taking that step is a must.
My rainy dream just got convince by a new sun
Dried up all my raindrops turn my night around.
Still a daydream covered my window so I stay asleep,Maybe it’s the fear of morning.
What would it bring?
The unseen worries my eyes.
A third eye, I the first eye.
I’m closed dreaming about yesterday’s rain and how good it felt to be wet.
You were right also about the rain, my rain and about the dream, my dream,
No matter how much I dream I will always awake to reality.

 

 

 

 

 

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dancinghawk commented on A Dreamer

10-07-2009

"over like over the mountain" ... love that from the start, double meaning ... and the image of "my rainy dream just got convinced by a new sun" is really powerful ... the whole interplay of "dream" and "reality" is perpetually fascinating to me, as I've had "reality" times that felt more like a haze, and "dream" times that felt more visceral and "real" ... love this exploration ... thx for the post!

Crush commented on A Dreamer

07-15-2009

i like your stuff because it feels so real...so fresh. thanks

cheohs commented on A Dreamer

07-11-2009

I feel it man, thats real, although for some reason, I get a feeling it's also about love making. We gotta discuss brother poet.

photochick commented on A Dreamer

06-30-2009

i so feel and understand what you mean here and understand the message you are portraying to others you are a really amazing poet great metaphors and use of words you know how to keep the reader hooked and feel what youa re saying keep writing you have an amazing talent with more inside i am sure

sammia commented on A Dreamer

06-28-2009

Very good i know what u mean by this and i get the message that comes from it fore my dreams are coming to reality..Great job I like it so keep up the great writing

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

jmylez’s Poems (8)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Love And Poetry 14
A Dreamer 13
You Were Right 17
Unspoken Words 10
The Strongest Love 7
Dear Paper 11
Love or Reality 5
I Sit and Wait 9