A First Date

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    A First Date

     A FIRST DATE

    I paint my eyes in colored hues.
    I lightly gloss my lips
    I check my watch a 1000 times
    My heart makes anxious flips.

    I smooth my clothes and check my face.
    My date is almost here.
    Around the house I quickly pace
    And try to hide my fear.

    The phone call comes; It's time to go.
    He waits for me outside
    I shake his hand and share my smile
    And ask " Ready to ride ?"

    We share a meal at Tommy's
    And some easy conversation
    I wonder what has happened
    To my earlier reservations

    I feel myself relaxing
    It's as if I'm with a friend.
    I start to feel excited
    And to hope we'll meet again.

    We take a trip for ice cream
    Then a movie at my place
    I snuggle close beside him
    And enjoy his warm embrace

    We share a little silence
    And he ask me for a a kiss
    I press my lips against his
    In a simple moments bliss.

    He hugs me when he has to leave
    And says that its been great.
    I tell him that I feel the same
    A perfect sweet first date

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    Phission commented on A First Date

    01-28-2011

    such a beautiful account ! i honestly felt like i was there with you, smoothing my clothes and checking my face as well. i adore this and adore you for writing this. 10
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    Papa commented on A First Date

    12-22-2010

    a knock on the door and a rose or two, then this would have been a perfect date it's true. I am old fashion, being an old fart has a lot to do with it. Men opening doors, ladies first, men picking up the check, Guys have it made now days and it's the womens fault for letting them slide.
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    gmcookie commented on A First Date

    06-03-2009

    Oh wow, Jennie. What a sweet poem. I am, for the most part, a structured writer myself. I really enjoy a good beat and tight rhyme. And you got it all kiddo. Lets see some more. And btw, he's a luck guy!
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    jasonbourne1234 commented on A First Date

    06-03-2009

    Wow...nice flow, i like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    anneliseh commented on A First Date

    06-03-2009

    i loved this poem!!! it was so sweet! and nice rhyming
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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