A Journey

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    A Journey

    I'm Still,
    As though my body is in a State of Paralyses.
    My breath is getting Slower and Slower.
    I can Perceive Sounds,
    but can't Grasp the Meanings.
    Suddenly there's Disturbing Feelings,
    they are all around me.
    Making me feel Insecure and Apprehensive.
    It's my Soul it's leaving me.
    I am moving Farther and Farther away.
    It's getting Darker and Darker.
    Where an I going I wonder.
    I see a Tunnel up ahead.
    It's Mysterious Looking.
    Then I see Little Sparksof Light,
    They're at the edge of the tunnel.
    They seem to be Guiding Me.
    As I enter the tunnel I see Light,
    tiny Sparks of Light all around me.
    They are ahead of me Lighting the Pathway.
    As I get toward the end of the Tunnel,
    I realize I too am a Little Spark of Light.
    There were many others everywhere.
    They are immersing themselves into what looks like A Light Beam.
    As I get closer to the beam I feel Warmth. it feels good.
    Should I step into the Beam like the others are
    I.m curious so I turn and walk into the Beam.
    In the beam I feel Peace of Mind,
    I also feel Clensed of all my Impurities.
    Some of the others are leaving.
    After a little while I hear a voice calling to me,
    it's time to go I heard the voice say.
    I am a little Hesitant,
    but I feel Confident I will be safe with them.
    We went back thru the tunnel.
    We were all taken to different places.
    I was Placed into a body,
    the body of a New Born Baby Boy.
    AND YES I BELIVE IN LIVE AFTER DEATH!!!  

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    MrGee commented on A Journey

    08-23-2010

    This is a well thought-out poem. The meter continues throughout the poem and you paint a good picture in the mind of this reader and yes we are all take to different places. The poem is similiar to one I have written entitled "The Journey" this is an obvious 10 from me.

    zan commented on A Journey

    11-02-2009

    wowo!!! This is something..........surprisingly it all seems familiar in some way!!! Great style and incredible flow....................Powerful!!!

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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