A lifes vision

3 Comments

Tags:
  • Art

    A lifes vision

    A lifes vision, enough to make one ponder, somewhere in the distance is always peering thounder.

    Theres a basket full of ways, this world attenpts to hold you under.

    This is a puzzle, that keeps me in constant wonder, looking past this storm to sweep me under.

    Things seem to strange to mention at times this incoherant life of rymes.

    Stories, we tell, reminders, of what once exsisted.

    So I say, steer clear, those masked dreams, and dark strangers.

    Be enlightened, and love, the smell of the rains, and yes the distant thounders.

    Poem Comments

    (3)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    Tempestlady commented on A lifes vision

    07-24-2009

    I'll read yours if you read mine. LOL. Just browse when you have the time. I sit with a corona and a lime, and just pass the time. Loved your rhyme. Write on.....

    Tempestlady commented on A lifes vision

    07-24-2009

    I really like this one. Might want to use the spell check, but you hit the nail on the head. I wish we could smell some rain around here. Everything is suffering. Good write, write on....

    alejapoet commented on A lifes vision

    03-06-2009

    Bravo!You have found your way of release and you write and have expressed yourself very well. Kudos to you my friend. Remember people will want to be your friend and will not look at your work at all so be careful of those people. Author Aleja Bennett http://alejabennett.net84.net

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

    hillbilly’s Poems (3)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    empty bottle 2
    Spirit Man is Calling 2
    A lifes vision 3

    hillbilly’s Friends (3)