A Pathway

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A Pathway

A simple soul; angelic breath.
To be struck down by fire, is a painful death.
No home to love, in an evil place.
Together a family, love embraced.
Angels in the eyes of God.

Taking a stroll, amiss the ocean.
Creative creation; unknown devotion.
Held in my hand is your hand,
To guide you through this unkind land.
A Pathway in the presence of God.

A love so pure, is that of God.
A sight so beautiful, is the sight of God.
Who so ever will, I beg thee come,
and live forever, in the land of God.

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yoliz commented on A Pathway

02-15-2009

u have such an amazing talent....the best i have seen on this site thus far......

BigBrooks commented on A Pathway

02-12-2009

I honestly believe that your first four lines are "Sick", like Skillz says in his song. You cease to rhyme at 5th line of each stanza. I believe that your poetry would benefit from you choosing to find a rhyming synonym for God, an

Realistic commented on A Pathway

02-02-2009

Bravo! Very nice read, u are a very talented poet.

deebo72 commented on A Pathway

02-02-2009

the only thing missing is a tear on a cheek

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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