A "Once Had"

7 Comments

Tags:
  • Lost Love
    • sjlove
    • hey everyone! check out my new poem "Good Mornings" let me know what you think.. =)

    A "Once Had"

    Someone that could have been more than a friend
    That friend could have been more than "us"
    Even if there were sparkles in our eyes
    Venus would still be the brightest in the skies
    Every night I look at the sky, thinking of you,
    again all through the night

    Maybe one day again,
    We'll meet and say, "Hi"
    Again with a smile,
    Hope to never say, "Goodbye"

    now close your eyes and make a wish
    hope that day we'll never miss
    see your smile brighten my day
    and I hope this time you'll stay.

    Poem Comments

    (7)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    ozzydio18 commented on A "Once Had"

    02-21-2009

    love your poem feel free to read mine anytime...

    omseattle commented on A "Once Had"

    02-20-2009

    what a great imagination!!!

    butterfly62463 commented on A "Once Had"

    02-14-2009

    Excellent too.Keep up the excellent poems I cry on this one.Missing my first love that I was thinking when I read this one. Have you read my poems yet and left a comments too?If not you can read them if you one.

    syed commented on A "Once Had"

    01-28-2009

    Untitled1 and dis one have one thing common they are soo hopeful that tells me lot about u as a person

    rollerderby commented on A "Once Had"

    01-21-2009

    the poem about the one that got away or is at least, just out of reach. When you wish upon a star anything is possible, especially if you let you heart guide your way. Great poem! Doug

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

    sjlove’s Poems (10)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    Good Mornings 4
    I Ain't 4
    Lull 3
    Finally 22
    Locking Lips 20
    Untitled 2 5
    Untitled 1 7
    A "Once Had" 7
    The Greatest 6
    Lovers' Duet 16