Addiction

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    Addiction
    You, me & Thee
    Spinning dizzily
    I look to my right
    What do I see?
    This Thee that stands
    between you and me.
    Certainly we could be
    happier, just you and me
    But Thee holds me fast
    And fast I hold Thee
    Forever parting,
    I uncurl my fingers to reveal
    Thee, snugly held in my palm.
    Thee may try to take flight
    But my grip is now too tight
    So until I take Thee
    And absorb it into me
    The space will exist
    between us three
    Continuing to whirl

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    hx commented on Addiction

    11-25-2008

    I like this, especially the last line (good stuff) - but I couldn't figure out who/what 'thee' is.
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    CLMatyskela

    06/02/2010

    Sorry for the late reply! I've been working and away from the site. "Thee" is the what the person is addicted to and how an addition is almost like a 3rd party in a relationship.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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