Among the waves

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Among the waves

by the sea off the land
there she lies there he stands
there his love has fallen down
in the mist among the waves.
he kneels low by her side
his eyes fill, he stares to cry
weeping sorrow fills his soul
in the mist among the waves.
with tears alone he empties his heart
he cant hold back the rain must start
he holds his love so close, so close
in the mist among the waves.
looking hard at her wrist
seeing only two large slits
here he fades, here he falls
in the mist among the waves.
sorrow seeps into his mind
driving down a rode that winds.
he stands before a hangers noose
around his neck he lay it loose
sorrow now will never heal
sorrow he will never feel
their bodies thrown out to sea
corpses they will forever be
in the mist among the waves


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JaneDoe commented on Among the waves

03-24-2011

your sis kellie: that was creepy and yet romantic too. your evil when you do that to me I hope you know...so sad and yet cute too nicely done.

glmel commented on Among the waves

05-26-2009

thats way out there...... in the deep....., past the mist amoung the waves....but it is good, though no one else have shared 2 cents...i will rate it....good job...keep working

JaneDoe

05/27/2009

thx... the poem was meant 2 b out there... and thx 4 the nice rate... do u rlly thank its that good?

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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