the first choice of falling

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okay its a bit dark but there are happy-er ones comming soon i hope

the first choice of falling

a fist full of pills
thats would do the trick.
Or a slit of the wrists
so hard to pick

Stabed through the stomic
bleed out of the floor,
whats if thats not enough?
Than i'll have to do more

Slice open my carotid
thats is duely noted.
What about my body?
Where will it be toated?

Burn to death with fire
that is quite a feat.
But the blistering pains
a sinsation hard to beat.

drown my self in water
yah that woud work fine
maybe drop in the toaster
send spikes down my spine

suffacate with a bag
that would work
maybe a knife through the heart
the pian'd be quite a perk

poison might work
but how to get the right dose
whtat about a note?
deffently not a facebook post.

no good day sunshine
so i guess thats all
but one things undicided
haw shall i take my fall?

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

JaneDoe’s Poems (8)

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the first choice of falling 0
breaking 4
How About it? 0
Never Ending Circus 2
For giving up 1
To whom this may concern. 1
Tear Drops 1
Among the waves 2